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Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« on: July 13, 2014, 10:29:36 AM »
I GUESS I WILL START THIS PONY SHOW

http://SHOOTproject.com/forum/index.php?topic=10576.0

The Isaac piece up at current is probably one of the better "good guy" promos you'll read.  The flashbacks to previous interactions were perfectly executed.  Nothing felt forced in terms of the development and you had all the grit and edge you want from Entragian, BUT NOW IN A CHEER-ABLE BOX!

Very very very great work.

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Re: Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2014, 04:55:59 PM »
I shall concur with those thoughts.

I was also impressed Kale's first.

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Re: Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2014, 08:41:11 PM »
Glad it was well received! Trying to find that dark/gritty antihero balance with Entragian right now, having fun with it too.

Lots of good shit so far this week...

Tanev's was an instant favorite. Tanev is still trying to claw and scratch his way out of the hole and rise above his past. Got bonus points from me for the bit about casino security...considering I work casino security :p

Jeff's stuff with the trio continues to be such an immersive read. You feel like you're being pulled down into the sketchy world that these guys exist in...where every little drug-fueled skirmish can be life or death. I like all three members of the trio, but my favorite is Wailer. Something about this huge, soulless suicide-surviving motherfucker with dirty grayish dreads bearing down on you...feels very creepy and very realistic in at the same time.

And Buck's first with the whole rewriting history thing cracked me the fuck up very badly...suckle this man's buckle, the Bluegrass Bad Ass is back and better than ever!







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Re: Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2014, 04:07:53 AM »
So im catching up on RPs while on the bus and using my tab...I get to the punchline in Omar Owens RP1 and every motherfucker is staring at me because it got me, I didn't see it coming and I geuinely laughed iut loud.



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Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2014, 03:21:09 PM »
G-Prime made me want to cry.

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Re: Revolution 127 - RP Feedback
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2014, 06:06:43 PM »
G-Prime made me want to cry.

Genuine emotion in that one. Tugged the ol' heart strings for sure.