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Revolution 130 RP Feedback
« on: September 09, 2014, 06:09:14 PM »
I figured I'd start this just to say...

These Godcast Podcasts are fuckin' amazing and hilarious. Can't get enough!






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« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2014, 07:54:39 AM »
DIRTY SECRET HOMELESS MAN

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« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2014, 09:33:55 AM »
Hmmm.

Do you mean:

"Dirty secret homeless man."

OR...

"Dirty secret, homeless man."


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« Reply #3 on: September 10, 2014, 10:59:28 AM »
Thanks for enjoying them... coming back I wanted to find a new way to promo in e-fedding. Sadly, I don't have the build of a wrestler so videos were out, but thankfully Podcasts are super popular and that works to my (Liam Neeson voice) particular set of skills.

Course it goes without saying that if I didn't have this creative community to work in I wouldn't have the inspiration. So thanks to you guys on that level too. (feedback on promos and things to come including Revolution 129 feedback which deserves all our love.)
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And there was.  And He IS Good.

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« Reply #4 on: September 10, 2014, 12:15:25 PM »
The only thing I'd suggest is maybe including a transcript, too. Podcast sites occasionally go down due to traffic and all.

Tanev has been impressing me more and more lately.

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« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2014, 12:31:10 PM »
I just upload to soundcloud and not an actual podcast site per say, but good point.
On the Eighth Day God Said... "Let there Be Jarvis."

And there was.  And He IS Good.

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« Reply #6 on: September 15, 2014, 11:01:27 PM »
I just finished reading Tanev's "Revelation"...and gotta say, I really can't praise your work enough. The slow burn storytelling is incredibly well done, the pacing is easy to follow and the narrative is packed with emotional hits that really catch you by surprise.

You paint such a vivid picture of a man who has fallen from grace by his own hand...and I can't wait for the next chapter.






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« Reply #7 on: September 16, 2014, 02:39:09 PM »
Thanks Jer.  This basically closes "Act I" of the Kale Tanev saga. 

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« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2014, 08:33:15 PM »
Just a couple of notes about my RP

1.  Sorry for waiting until the last minute.  I had an outline drawn up for the RP last week, but I took on a few home projects this week that took up more time during the day than I expected and knocked me out at night from exhaustion.

2.  I didn't have permission from anyone to use their characters in my RP, but I hope that since it's just some fictional stories Freak is telling and that they're non-canonical that it's okay.

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« Reply #9 on: September 22, 2014, 05:38:11 AM »
Dear Will,

Fuck you for being too damn good.

Sincerely,
Drez

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« Reply #10 on: September 22, 2014, 05:57:13 AM »
Loved all the rp's I've seen so far. Shout-out to J and Matt - excellent work from both!

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« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2014, 11:23:31 AM »
Dear Will,

Fuck you for being too damn good.

Sincerely,
Drez

Drezzy should write for Hallmark :D

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« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2014, 11:44:40 AM »
I'd like to add, as I just got caught up.  DDAAAAYYYYYYYUUUUMMMM  the Master of the Mat Semifinals!  All four of you fellas, well done. 

Those two matches with Cripp/Laz, and this show feels damn near like a PPV already!

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« Reply #13 on: September 24, 2014, 06:49:12 PM »
I'll just state for the record that I loved working with Trey this week. He's one of my favorite opponents ever because he pushes me to places with Isaac that I hadn't even discovered before.

Purely from a reader's POV, I'm REALLY looking forward to Corazon/Tanev. Both of those guys killed it this cycle and the match will be incredibly close to call. Also really enjoyed everything from Anarchy vs Zex/Omar...that'll be another great match I'm sure.